OMG, this without exaggeration is one of ur finest poem, the best poem you have ever ever ever written meme, one of the cutest verses deepest emotions have been poured, oh how in love u are, and i dnt blame u haha.. oh my god.

this is something i relate to a lottttttt...i love it..
nothing no words will tell u how perfect this is, deserves a front page, no vots left i wont forget it next week.

claps..loud claps meme

Meme.
I somehow agree with Nana.

You know what?
It's the first time ever I read such a poem with such a flawless flaws-free rhyming scheme. It was spontaneous, and no word felt forced.

You just poured your heart here.
And the end.. I didn't expect it. The title also is amazing. It reflected what it was all about.

Amazing piece.
Nomi next week

^ I agree with both Nana and Abed.

I hate commenting when the members before me have said it all.

Mmmmm

You were my source of inspiration
I needed you as much as I needed air
My words used to fly with temptation
just by the wind playing with your hair

^ I totally loved this stanza, the flow like the rest was perfect but this line, just was so serene and gentle, the imagery awesome

Love
Tara
x

Blockbuster
You've outdid your self with this,
I really believe it's so good that you should
either publish it or Send it to someone who plays guitar

Next week Nomination

Such a nice poem. specially its becasue its love poem and i love love poems now. i like the way you express. a one thing special in your writing that its so understanable and easy to read and feel. thats what i like in your poetry.... my favorite lines are

You were my source of inspiration
I needed you as much as I needed air

good work