Savior

by Jack Nightengale   Oct 12, 2011


Will you allow someone to pull you out of the darkness?
Will you allow someone to be the ray of light to the dungeon you've been put in?
Will you allow someone to break the chains that bind you to this dark chamber?
Will you allow me to be your Savior?

Let me free you from the hell that you're in.
Let me guide you away from the darkness.
Let me be the sun that warms you, comforts you, free you.
Let me be your Savior

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  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Not all of my poems have things to do with the military. To know the meaning behind this poem one must open their imagination more than what it already is. It originally was a poem where two people were talking. However I shortened it and used one side of the conversation. I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you for your comment.

  • 12 years ago

    by christopher

    Hey sailor there is more to life than the war.
    the real savior was nailed to the cross to save war mongers like you poetry is not about blowing your ego on military experiences U.S soldier

  • 12 years ago

    by Bridges

    Yeah! If this doesn't sound like you, then I don't know what does!! You have such a caring nature anymore, and that's admirable!! The world needs hereos' like you, Kris!! Nice one. ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I really like this alot :D honestly, i wasnt a true christian till about 3 months ago.. but i have realized that life seems lonely without that person you know will still be there :) i like this

  • 13 years ago

    by Whatever works

    Kris

    this was amazing.

    :)

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