Wow great poem really fantastic I say 5/5 for me :) :)

Amazing. i love it.

When you get used to darkness all around you,it is difficult to hope for a miracle to happen.When the light inside us is darkness,can't fathom how dark it is inside.When hope dies,will dies,we can't save ourselves,even when God sends a savior.

Powerful thoughts.We have a savior now. 5/5

You are my savior.

Nicely done bro. Hopefully they will accept a helping hand

Powerful and breathaking, as always :)

That is suitable to be a verse in a song.

I really like how the simple questions provoke your mind and make you ponder thoroughly. It was eerie by all means, eerily perfect.

You know I quite enjoyed this

I read it and thought of all the people out there who are depressed, lonely or just down in the dumps!

How often they have waited for someone to come and save them from the hell that they are in.

This is a beautiful poem, poetic and romantic.

Not every day you find someone willing to be the saviour

well written

x

Be someone else's savior :)

Then sing o" saint of Brighness, behold thy might within the eternal light.

Amazing; the questions were very thought provoking and I hope if you wrote this for someone they actually think it through after reading the questions. If it isn't for someone, then you did an amazing job making someone understand how you felt and what you wanted to be for someone else or maybe, what they want to be for someone they care about.

5/5

Kris

this was amazing.

:)

I really like this alot :D honestly, i wasnt a true christian till about 3 months ago.. but i have realized that life seems lonely without that person you know will still be there :) i like this

Yeah! If this doesn't sound like you, then I don't know what does!! You have such a caring nature anymore, and that's admirable!! The world needs hereos' like you, Kris!! Nice one. ;)

Hey sailor there is more to life than the war.
the real savior was nailed to the cross to save war mongers like you poetry is not about blowing your ego on military experiences U.S soldier

Not all of my poems have things to do with the military. To know the meaning behind this poem one must open their imagination more than what it already is. It originally was a poem where two people were talking. However I shortened it and used one side of the conversation. I really appreciate your feedback. Thank you for your comment.