OMG YAKZ!

You are a poetess! Guess how could I know?
:O
This piece refers that you are a 100% poetess!!! o0mggg

I give birth to pieces,
that hurt like losing a first love..

^

i sooo LOVE this!

You might think that
they are nothing
but harmless words,
painted with metaphors
taking a nap on a
in a dusty notebook..

^^
there is something wrong here...
taking a nap on a...
then in a ...
i dont know o.O
i just found it to be a bit weird..

yakzzz, oh yakzz
your poems are a treatment
to the heart and even
if it might make you feel cursed
but u are talented
and how beautiful this curse is!

good luck, babygirl.

It is a curse indeed, as I can never get off from your "spells". I love this poem, because it shows sadness, anger, and this rebellious character ...
i love that you used some of the very interesting lines and images to express how painful it is, kind of bring up the events that most ppl will relate to, like losin a 1st love, to show how much u mean it.

i love your work..
well done