Ocean of Passion

by Kips2.0   Oct 12, 2011


Deep inside,
you have an ocean of passion,

I know,
because I studied your reaction,

coming closer to you,
I felt your body vibration,

from the start,
you have a physical attraction.

Inside,
you have an ocean of passion,

always giving a reaction
to my action,

wanting me
with a great determination,

but finding it difficult
to let out your emotion.

Inside,
you have an ocean of passion,

in your eyes
is all the answers to my questions,

anytime I successfully get you
in a good position,

I realize deep inside,
you have an ocean of passion.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Phantasma

    Lovely poem, lovely diction. However, there is one small thing I would change. Instead of saying "I felt your body vibration" I feel it would be best said as "I felt your bodies vibration". Over all though I found this to be a wonderful poem. Keep up the admirable writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Thanks for your comment! Although it gets confusing at some point, but it's cool to know that you like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Getting to know how reluctant 'her' emotions are to show-up, really points it clear, d@ yr case study about this, is OBVIOUSLY indisputable! Great work gem, tnx 4 shar'n. Much Enjoy'd this 1. Keep bring'n in d right dogs bro! Hi 5! @ least.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    Thanks Alissa for the comment!!

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