by Brittany Klein Oct 13, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
10-3-11 |
I agree that this was a powerful poem and I did not mind the length at all. Every stanza expressed your struggle, how you felt like your life had no meaning to realizing that people care. But that does take time. I think it is only human for us all to go through dark periods in our life. |
by Lioness
Hey! |
Wow, this is so powerful and I can relate oh too well! :) An awesome piece and the ending was perfect! :) |
by otakutechie
Great poem, really paints the picture of what happens behind closed doors (the sad truth).... takes me back when i lived in South Dakota and had a few friends that did this..... as well as several classmates..... its was sad.... such a repressed town/state... |
by E Dacaf
It was very long. Now that I said that, I feel the length forces you to aknowledge that this has been going on for a while. So when in the end the character stops the self abuse it makes it that much dramatic-and POWERFUL. |