This was quite lovely. I like the form; the one stanza, more like prose but poetically laced. "The light has yet to fade." -- Beautiful, a positive, uplifting piece.

First of all I'd like to recommend you to think about a better way of presenting this poem because the way it is right now it may seem rather scaring off than inviting. People do not seem to be interested into seeing "a wall of text", but prefer stanzas, I guess you know what I mean. If you did break up the lines it'd flow better too and stress specific things more than others. Alright enough with that.

Your words portray a vivid image. I like how I got the possibility to literally imagine this and see it happen in my head. Your words fit to what you were describing and I could not think of better. The emotions you convey are strong, heartfelt and captivating. This poems seems to be really sincere. I have to agree with the comment above: I really like the last sentence. It is encouraging. Overall it was a pleasure to read this poem and it'd be even inviting for the eyes if you edited it a little.

Wow very awesome and fantastic and lovely aw what am i sayin i loved it :) 5/5

This poem is lavly, the ending is just brilliant. You have your own style which is good i must say.

5/5

I agree with Jenni, but maybe because it's of small length that one is prompted to read it.

And oh, it was romantic with all the lights and the fading at the end. It felt really smooth. Great job.