Trust issues

by shayla   Oct 13, 2011


You broke my heart
and you didn't care
as you said sorry
i for give you and believed in you
then again you broke my
as you still didn't care
i thought i could believe in you
and trust you

i don't think i could trust a boy again

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  • 13 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    Boys are young so adolscences takes over, time makes a person better, people can change and you will trust agian great piece

  • 13 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    Boys are young so adolscences takes over, time makes a person better, people can change and you will trust agian great piece

  • 13 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    Boys are young so adolscences takes over, time makes a person better, people can change and you will trust agian great piece

  • 13 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    "i for give you and believed in you"
    instead of for give, i think it should be forgave

    "then again you broke my"
    i feel as if there is a word missing in this line

    "as you still didn't care"
    This line can be replaced with "and you still didn't care"
    it will flow better in that way..Hope you dont mind me criticizing. Apart from that, this is a great piece.

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