"i for give you and believed in you"
instead of for give, i think it should be forgave

"then again you broke my"
i feel as if there is a word missing in this line

"as you still didn't care"
This line can be replaced with "and you still didn't care"
it will flow better in that way..Hope you dont mind me criticizing. Apart from that, this is a great piece.

Boys are young so adolscences takes over, time makes a person better, people can change and you will trust agian great piece

Boys are young so adolscences takes over, time makes a person better, people can change and you will trust agian great piece

Boys are young so adolscences takes over, time makes a person better, people can change and you will trust agian great piece