Comments : Choke

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Is this single,
    is this what it's like,
    to feel all kinds,
    but i only want one,
    to be held precious forever,
    the one and only,
    supposed to be true.

    you just lost control,
    and honest is what you are,
    developing feelings,
    maybe for too many,
    one,two,maybe love,
    three,maybe a crush,
    can you figure this out.
    - i love these... trying to figure out what love is & if he wants you and only you.

    The poem was brilliant :)
    Feeling what single is & that he can only pick one and if its not you to let u find yourself.
    amazing job
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Bobby

    "Can you decide,
    who is the one"

    Always tough to decide who is the one truly worthy,

    Beauty of the heart can never be denied

    Love it would make a great song too :0)