by Katiejeann Oct 14, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I thought you loved me, I thought you cared. |
by sociopathic
Omg.loved it. |
by Sylvia
Sorry you are having to go through a breakup, nothing worse in the whole world regardless of your age. I see you are new to the site and not sure if you are new to writing as well. You did a good job with the rhymes, presenting your message. There were just a few places where it could have read smoother. All in all you did a good job. If you are new to writing, keep at it you have potential. |
by Lostlove1
Nice for your first poem Katie. I am proud of you! |