This poem was awesome. It was really strong and emotion rang out of every line. For a short poem this said a lot

5/5

Welcome to the site. The title caught my eye and must say the poem is good. There is a message and you presented it well and the flow and rhymes are good.

Your words brought to mind an image of a pair of lips with really red lipstick and the emotions one might experience. Well done.

Yes, welcome to PnQ, dear newbie. :)

Everything in this write seems interesting. But I wanted it to be a bit longer, for I was really drawn in, didn't want it to finish. :)

Good work, I look forward to reading a new one by you, good luck.

First of all welcome to the site.

I have to agree with the comments above that the title is really eye-catching and it's original too. Your poem flows really well and though it's short you manage to set a really interesting scenery with your words. I do not really have anything to fault and I think that this poem is well written.

Wow this is awesome I loved it and you put this in a new way very kool and it was worded well too,,,it was short but a great short,,,I really enjoyed reading it keep up the good work :) :) 5/5