You painted a vivid romantic picture. The reader could experience this moment of magic through your words. Excellent write

Wow... this poem is so beautiful. I couldn't agree more with TJ... you painted a lovely romantic picture, that I could imagine and feel. I loved your choice of words, and your metaphors were perfect. The last stanza was the strongest for me and the ending was perfect. Amazing poem! Definitely worth a nomination :)

Perfection.

"...and everywhere,
everywhere are lovers outlined"

^ Perfect repetition.

Nice poem, though it's softer and sweeter than I would expect coming from you.

Oh,so scientist do have a soft-side?...lmao..jk...

I loved this..
how the poem itself is very calm..
I can almost hear the tone...someone might use when reading this poem out loud..kind of like a whisper you see .."ahh,these nights love"... Its so very soft.. I love the way the poem is laying on the page.kinda..like it is taking a sweet nap..and its all cozy.. it kinda fits the way you are speaking of comfort in this piece..usually poems seem like thrown on the page you know? the usual stanza's..the pauses and all I don't know what..

but this was,perfect..
I loved it even before it won..and also read it a few times...already..but sometimes I'm just too lazy to comment -.-'

but like I've told you before..
I am a fan of yours :)

and I look forward for more! Mwa!

This has left me speechless. No amount of words can sum up how beautiful this composition is. Pure magic.. Must say, this was romantic and very heavy. Splendid job.

It sound slike these nights might be the night of February 14th - Valentines day

What a romantic poem. I love it. Flowed easy. I love it when the artist easily creates a picture in my head to connect with the poem easier

I turn my face, finally, to the warmth
of your neck, secretly kissing each tiny pulse
until I join you in sleep.

^^^^^^^^

I love these lines - It shows me how connected these two people are and how in love they are

Well written

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3:52 am..and I'm thinking of this..

here for read 1 million and sooo..
I think I'm inspired..

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