I very powerful and inspiring poem!
bringing out what you feel on the inside.
I wish everyone could put this into practice.
The flow was good
I like it!
5/5

Beautiful, inspiring...the kind which draws admiration and a purpose to life. Well penned.

Wow, very well written, It is full of beautiful imagery and you executed each sentence with the utmost vivid and creative structure I have seen in a long while. Awesome work. Thank you for the comment on mine. I really love the message in this piece by the way. 5/5

God dang it I accidentally posted the same comment in two different poems, my finger deleted and pasted the last comment I sent you lol. Okay THIS Poem is AMAZING!!! I really really enjoyed it, the message is greatly inspiring and holds so much love and belief in ones heart.; The way you just let it flow is genuinely heartfelt and soul warming. It really makes me just want to get up and live my life, follow my dreams to the fullest. BEAUTIFUL job! I love it. And sorry for that silly mistake lol. :p 5/5!!! Love to hear what you think of more of my poetry by the way.

So strong. just the ideal poem for me!