A very touching poem well written with excellent flow and emotional currants running through it..Brilliant

First of all I really like the title because of it being so contrary and it's not the usual title one would read. I think that the sadness in this poem is outstanding and absolutely captivating, it is very relateable too because I'm sure everybody lost someone they would prefer to still be with. I definately enjoyed reading this poem, not only because of its emotions, but also because it flowed well and because of the message you convey.

I love your poem. i may be 12 but seeing this instantly makes me more mature i wish i could gain knowledge from poems instead of school. the poem you created instantly touched me and made me emotional but since i always hide my emotions from the real world no one could consume my sorrow