Another Day

by Staind Soul   Oct 14, 2011


Always lost inside this place,
Empty promises upon on my face,
Winds of my sorrow blow it all away,
Left with a night without a day,

Wrinkles remind me of the pain,
My soul weighed down by the rain,
Left here without friends,
The same old story that never ends,

What's the reason to exist,
When your gone and never truly missed,
Another day inside this place,
Left with a zombie of a face

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  • 13 years ago

    by Staind Soul

    Yeah it was something I just put together really fast without really thinking about it

  • 13 years ago

    by Jessie

    Really good poem, had good rhyming that didnt seem forced to me.... The only thing i would suggest is changing the word zombie from this line

    "What's the reason to exist,
    When your gone and never truly missed,
    Another day inside this place,
    Left with a zombie of a face"

    I feel you could have fond a better word that would have a better effect and really tie off the poem

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