The Reflection

This is well-penned. As I read it, I didn't even stop. Shows the flow was awesome (for me, anyway). The theme is dark and beautiful.

'A beautiful girl with gorgeous eyes
hidden in a world of her demise'
This part stood out for me. Rhymes flowed well and at the same time gives a great imagery.

5/5 :) Keep writing!

-X

Hello, Jessie!

Your rhymes made a lovely yet sad tone, and gave depth to the poem, well-done. ;)

'The reflection of you always daunting,
Never free from the taunting'

^

I just guess that these two lines were a little bit...just a little bit 'weird'? I don't know, they didn't flow much well. =/ Maybe that's just me! :)

Good poetry, nevertheless, sadness all over the piece. Keep writing, lovely.

I liked this one, reminds me of when I stare into the mirrior. Short yes, but ity said what it needed to.

Great write, it was amazing and the emotion was so good, I believe that you done really good on this poem
5/5

A very good write, u capture the emotion in scenes so vividly. clear and concise with a good flow.