Shed A Tear

by Beautiful Disaster   Oct 15, 2011


A lonely twin can fall to his death
but will the world change?

a kind man, an addict to meth.
his soul enslaved.

so listen for the cry of time,
a sound you'll never hear.

your life is gone,
a shattered hell

but god wont shed a tear.

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  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Oh my, this poem is interesting for sure. You have done an amazing job. Emotion is well done as is the story. The voice and tone you have given this piece really does give it strength, because the word choice wasn't anything special. Anyway I love the simplicity, yet depth of this 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jubb Jubb

    I love this poem sooooo much! its so full of emotion! well done!

  • 13 years ago

    by Jess

    BTW I just nominated this Poem! I LOVED it that much! Hopefully everyone else does as well! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jess

    Wow! I REALLY Enjoyed this!
    Its Short, and sweet. Well not sweet, but you know! Haha
    Perfect! I Loved It Gurl!
    5/5

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