Wow! I REALLY Enjoyed this!
Its Short, and sweet. Well not sweet, but you know! Haha
Perfect! I Loved It Gurl!
5/5

BTW I just nominated this Poem! I LOVED it that much! Hopefully everyone else does as well! :)

I love this poem sooooo much! its so full of emotion! well done!

Oh my, this poem is interesting for sure. You have done an amazing job. Emotion is well done as is the story. The voice and tone you have given this piece really does give it strength, because the word choice wasn't anything special. Anyway I love the simplicity, yet depth of this 5/5