You fool

by shameka love   Oct 15, 2011


You left her,, then you came to me! you filled up my head! with all the "i love you's" and "i need you's" you captured my heart with what i taught was the truth! i taught u loved me!! how can you be such a fool!!

you broke my heart and left me in tears.. if you think she's as good as i am... well FOOL think again!! she is
no saint! she wont love you as much as i did!! you had her once,, you know what she's like! and still you decide to get back with her!!

your such a fool and i dont mean to be cruel but your such a fool! and u made me cry because i was madly in-love with you!!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Darren

    Again Brandy the emotion in this is fantastic, But people will skip over reviewing this because of the form,

    (Taught should be thought)

    I would read it aloud to yourself
    Where you pause, start a new line.
    This will help with the flow.

    This is just my suggestion, but like I said you have done the hard part, just the layout to do.

    keep writing.

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