Comments : Downtown, Baby

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well, I am pleasantly surprised, this was really good, I loved the way you expressed your ideas and the way people are made to look a certain way and act certain ways, this is a huge problem in spociety today.

    And that ending was like really good with some humour yet seriousness.

    An amazing talent.
    Love
    Tara
    xxx

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    I'm very glad I've discovered YOU, also :)

    THIS IS DEFINITELY an amazing poem...

    lol, there is a lot of sarcasm.. and still, reality :)

    NOMINATIOOOONN penned..
    this is definitely a front-page winner!!!