by Peter Duncombe Oct 15, 2011
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Life is but a journey with many twists and turns. |
I do seem to have neglected all those that have been kind enough to comment on my poems, for this I can only say 'sorry'. |
This was a little raw in presentation but the talent is there. You're words were wise , with vivid impressions. A nice flow. I enjoyed the read |
Wow,,,it may not have flowed quite right but i loved it and it was awesome,,,a fantastic read,,,and a very good truthful amazing poem,,,keep up the good work :) |