Wow,,,it may not have flowed quite right but i loved it and it was awesome,,,a fantastic read,,,and a very good truthful amazing poem,,,keep up the good work :)

This was a little raw in presentation but the talent is there. You're words were wise , with vivid impressions. A nice flow. I enjoyed the read

I do seem to have neglected all those that have been kind enough to comment on my poems, for this I can only say 'sorry'.
Innocent Fairy I'm so happy that you enjoyed this poem and at the same time i will agree with you that it is difficult to follow.
It doesn't 'flow' does it? but the words seemed to fit when I wrote it, I am still learning.
Thank you once more.
Peter.