This is amazing:) I love it:) the last stanza is my fav, and a 5 from me

Jen,
I can only say one word,
"Intruiging"

Simply wonderful.
It's one of those poems that the meaning is hidden so well, I can only guess that it is about losing who you are?

love,
Tara

I agree with Tara very well-written one thing I like about your poems is the fact that you know how to keep the reader interested, good job.

Damn you, girl. Why am I forced to cry everytime I read a sad piece by you? Is that why you write them in the first place? Lol :P
Kidding!

What I like about this piece other than the emotions, the sadness and the whole mouthwatering meaning, other than the nostalgia and despair hidden in between the words, I liked the originality. Let me talk honestly, usually, I read your work and think of it as a little bit banal, because I cannot find a new thought in the piece. And I actually only care about the originality, that should be penned with simple words, and again, usually, you complicate your words, not always, no sometimes. I don't want to sound rude but trust me, I have been there, and what made me feel better about my poetry is creating my own ideas that define my own feelings, regardless what others may think of it, for example I found this piece and the whole lots of meaning within it to be interesting, intriguing and new! Others may disagree, but you should be aware that it is your best because it holds Jenni somewhere within. :)

I've read this poem a dozen times trying to find the words to comment. But sadness is what I feel each time. The emotional loss, the inner pain.
You're so vivid in wording, and clarity of meaning. Excellent job

JENNI :D

This piece is epic.
I like the precise and the detailed descriptions of every verse. It's as if you're not missing any detail..
OMG. The second stanza hit my heart.
It felt real.. a movie..like a movie..by the window.. waves... despair..loneliness.

You nailed it.
NOMINATION,,next week

It is rather hard to find words to comment on this creative piece. A flawless composition. Precisely detailed. It does make one feel a bit blue because of how perfect it is. You are very talented. I wish I had better words to praise such an organized portray of emotions.

Jenni this is a piece worth reading.Some ppl have a flair for writing with feeling, something that would make us weep silently or laugh out loud.This was a sad poem but done so nicely

Connie

I Really Like This Piece, It Is Overwhelming. I Love How Innocently You Portrayed Saddness.. Perfectly. I Love All Your Poetry But I Have To Say This Is By Far The Best Piece I've Read By You.
The Meaning Is Hidden So Well And I Love That, And You Didnt Force The Hidden Meaning. It Flowed Gently And Perfectly! Nice Work! 5/5
-Jessi

Jenni this was soo good your talent shines through every word well penned :D

This was really interesting and different. The idea behind it was amazing and i wonder what exactly brought on this poem in your life. It hit home to me because I've felt this way and in the same kind of situation before... It has been one of the best poems I have ever read. Thank you for sharing it. :3

I am not on a level to comment on such great work..you have talent, no doubt about that..

This poem is so wonderful, and so beautifully written! my favorite part is the ending. 5/5

This is an amazing write it really makes you stand out on this site and I will now be adding you to my favorite poets section

5/5

This is such and amazing poem, i'm at a loss of words on how to comment on such a great piece. it was captivating and full of emotion 5/5 ^.^

The ending definitely put the perfect topper on what was already a brilliantly written poem. I must admit that I also think I've fallen in love with this poem. So that means it will be going into my favorites as well. :D

5/5

-Heather