I always relate poems to songs. It's a weird trait of me. But I should speak honesty: This felt like the song: Breathless (by Taylor swift - sung for Haiiti). It's not about two lovers, it's about human love.. But you can't know that, really.

Anyway, What I like the most is the opening and the ending stanzas.

They can stand out alone, without the mid-two though these two stanzas in the middle speaks WOAH things and emotions.

I like this damp, sad, dreamy atmosphere you have created.. Longing for 'him'.. This no more reachable person.

maybe one day I look, and you'd be there
waiting for me to come running to hold you
^ this is so sweet, sad, touching...

AMAZING.
five

Now every time the rain falls, I just stare
looking through the window for a new view
maybe one day I look, and you'd be there
waiting for me to come running to hold you
- i love this stanza hun.

This poem is amazing :). Remembering the past and wanting to go do it so bad, then stopping. Realizing hes not there anymore, but having hope he will show up.

Flawless piece :)
5/5

To talk about your imagination is something,
but to talk about the sincere emotions felt throughout the poem is what i need to be doing.
you've aced it,
This is without a doubt something i relate to,
especially the fact where you refrain from doing something because it takes two. and that person being your loved one
speechless
5/5 dear.

Once again, beautifuly and emotionaly writen..
Flow shud hv been a lil more bt i cnt stp myslf frm gvng u 5..

Meeemeee...this is amazing, i love howu use simple words, and how u put images aside then achieve to reach my heart..

this is outstanding and i read it last night a lot, and now a lot, and i still dont have the right words to say..

well done, i enjoy your work, and love to read everything u write my innocent lady

Ur writes r so touchin.... hmmmmm... yupp dey r really touchin n diz one was better, keep it up

This poem is such a sad meaning and memories behind it. towards the love. i am so happy to read this kind of poem. though its a sad piece too. i love the idea the kid is playing under rain and they do not know anything about the reality and just play. and then u are watching them outside from the window it creates the strong image in my mind that inspires me to write something like that. excellent piece of writing. and once again the last stanza touched my heart. such a sad stanza. specially last two lines are my best lines about this poem...

maybe one day I look, and you'd be there
waiting for me to come running to hold you

its simply brought the tears from my eyes. but sometimes we know nobody wait for us but we still hope someone is somewhere who still wait for us. same like the last line. someone is waiting for the writer or a person to hold them..
such a true and touching feelings that really makes and brought me inside it.. i really felt this poem from all my heart. good piece of poetry.. you are my favorite.