Good one (Y)

I liked the ending of it, and how it runs smoothly in places, and quick in other places, like the blooming teenager :)

My, my, my. I don't even know where to begin with this. I think this is something that anyone who reads this, will feel connected. They will feel like you reached into them and wrote of their feelings. I think we all must write of that person that hurts us because its our release, and pain is the easiest to write.

' because deep inside I know.. you're the only thing that comes naturally..'

I love this part. I have read it over and over and just adore it. Love, love!

Oh lala! Jeeze, Yakz!

'and,
I am..
sick and tired of it..
sick and tired of having you
in my thoughts,
of allowing my heart
to disrespect my mind
and twisting
what should be my truth.'

Truth should not be definite, because most of the time, what we hide is the truth and what we show is just a lie. Truth isn't always clear, dear Yakz, do not force yourself to forget him, because the more you force yourself, the more he can get to you & your writings.

:) I love you.

I love the same part that britt loved, you know yaki sometimes, some ppl just like some emotions comes naturally..and u can never hate nature for what it brings!

you cant hate urself for loving someone, or blaming yourself for it. feelings are things we cannot control, however do have the abiility to stop its flow only when we decide to.

there is not, I cannt, and there is no, impossible. there is only, I do not want, and do not wish , nd do no dare.

sometimes we are too afraid to let go of someone..until something or another someone comes up and proves you wrong.

i love the honesty and faithfulness in this poem, the feeling of being stuff there..in the middle of your emotions fields..and the tense of wanting to reach again what u lost..this weeakness as well.. just make sure you're not surrounded by jerks ;)

love it too :)