by Truelove Oct 17, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
cyber love
I Figured Out That He Adores Me Just Like How I Did <3 |
by Natasha
This is beautiful. Though the choice of words in this piece is pretty simple, but that makes this piece easier to understand, I believe. Lovely. Keep up the good work, love! |
by Truelove
Thanks |
by East Poetry
Not a bad expression of your heart. Its warming to know and see how love changes your life for the positive. love is the most beautiful thing in existence, ironic that it's also so fragile. Brings a whole new meaning to the term. |
I think you penned a good poem but having capital letters like you have take from the poem/ |
by Truelove
Thanksss :) |
by L
I like it as well, but then again the capital letters all over the poem. It does make it unique, but it just stealing the attention of the reader. My advice, lose the capital letters and just use it whenever its appropriate. |