I'm to busy laughing to even be able to comment properlyyyy LMAO.....YOU ARE ONE WICKED LADY! I LOVEEE IT!

I have to admit you got me with this one. I am thinking a dear friend, one that has always been there for you lmao..well gotcha is right.
I smiled reading the end, and thought how creative you are in writing this excellent in every way lol

Connie

My favorite toilet poem ever! This had me in tears!

Dear Lu..
I did not know this was one of those toliet poems. But as I read, I was torn weither this first stanza was from partyin' or perhaps bulima even:

Many times you saw me
with my hair astray and
tears sparkling in my eyes,
yet you always kept our secret

And again with your next stanza:

You were always there
to lean on
when I needed you most
and always listened as
I cussed and swore that I
would NEVER do this again.
And not once did you lecture me
when yet again ... I lied to you

I loved the way you wrote as if the toliet was a person!

But to me it was more sad than anything..but I so much could relate to every line in your poem.

By faR the best toliet poem I've read. I hope you won.

Oh Lu! You crafty little minx!

There was so much of this poem I loved.
The part about leaving jello shots on the seat, hahahaha!!! Too cute! : )
Great job!!!

I read the poem and thought it was serious! I thought you were writing about a person now I know your writting about a toilet all I can say is LOL!

5/5

Awww this was actually an adorable piece to me. It made me think of my best friend and all the times we've had each others backs at the weakest parts of our lives. I really like that you just ended this poem with one word. Very catchy to me.
you did great with this!!
Chelsey

How can somthing so deep. .. Have an ending like that it lol amazing xx

How can somthing so deep. .. Have an ending like that it lol amazing xx

How can somthing so deep. .. Have an ending like that it lol amazing xx