Comments : Nested words

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    The cutest poem :)

    Maybe I can learn another
    language, or perhaps invent
    new letters, make new words.
    So the next time I see you, I
    don't stand there speechless.
    - This shows how much he means to you, how hard you want to try & show your love to him, to fill up his soul with your words that prove how much he means to you.

    I can see you actually doing this, finding any new way to show him your feelings. This flowed perfect, penned your love & sadness.

    Amazing hun:)<3
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by RSJ

    Dear god, if this isn't the best poem you've ever written in your life
    i'll be damned if i didn't nominate it come monday
    seriously awe inspiring to read what you write.

  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    My, my.
    I love how you related that to words..dictionaries..and books.

    It's just original, and captivating.

  • 13 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    XP reached out , your oK running low on hope SINCE no more pretty thoughts pop >D the being is drifting uNspoken n' uplifting emotions THE WHATEVER CASE

  • 13 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    WOW very emotional poem, i cant describe how good i think it is! 5/5 well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    Ohh it takes time

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I repeat what banbo3a said! this is wow...the 2nd time i am dazzled that much by you, i love it so so much, i love ur word choice, metaphors and wording,

    vry original, very inspiring and very very deep, i too will nominate this for next week.
    well done, very very talented

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    WOWWW! I'm speechless... this poem is AMAZING... I loved every word, but most importantly I loved the story you expressed, and how you expressed it... so beautiful! I love the idea of writing too many poems for this person, and how there is a library of thoughts and of the poems you've written... I loved it!! So creative and unique. And perfectly chosen title! You are not only a great poet, but great at choosing titles! Great job sweetie!

  • 12 years ago

    by Nema

    I love the title :)

    Although I still love "Let it be me" the most out of all the poems I read for you, this is nothing less than a great, great write that holds three things I could die to get; words, silence and BOOKS!!! :D Haha I'm a bookworm in case you don't know.
    Your last stanza, hence, was my favorite :)

    You're beautiful, keep writing!! :))