Into the autumn nights
icy cold breeze
freezing my tears
and autumn colors swirl

She shimmers in the moons
luminous glow
and in her eyes the stars
sparkle and glisten aglow,
with her heart on pause
her mind carries on.
- my 2 fav stanzas :)

Wanting nothing more then to be with him, standing in the breeze as her mind continues to go on. While her heart stays still hoping for the best.

Penned with perfect sad emotion, flows so perfectly making you want to read more. I found nothing wrong with this<3

5/5

Good job, I lliked it alot