She hates this feeling
rotting in her core
killing her inside
thinking let go
but wanting him so much
- a feeling i know all to well :(. But you described the feeling of how much it hurts perfectly.

I love this poem. Not sure whether to hold on for dear life let him be with someone else or to keep trying & never give up. You can visualize the tears flowing out of your eyes, feel the pain as you write each word

Amazing poem<3
5/5

This is Good Stuff.I Like Your Writing.

Thanxs Donnie :D

Thanxs :)

A turbulent poem of emotion, lifted by winds of indecision, excellent poem.

Woww; its insane how perfectly I Relate To This At This Point In My Life.. AndIts Inspiring.. Like, I Feal Like I Can Let Go But I Dont Want To. you Know? :) Its Just Hard. And Thats What You Said And It Basically Sums It Up, Hard! Lol
Good Work!
5/5
Jessi

Hey! Fairy Queen did you know you crossed 200 mark with this one. You may be in the top 1% of the PnQ writers for crossing this mark. Congratulations on another ingenious, impasiioned, insightful, and intense luv doodle!

Wow.. that is a real feeling one has when your lover ignores you !!! nice poem :)

I have no words to praise your write. I could feel my heart cry when tears flooded in my eyes.

Touched.