As I close my eyes and think of you
My heart crumbles onto the floor
I don't want to dream of you after all
And I will not love you anymore...
-This is filled with such raw pain.
This poem honestly left me speechless. The love yall used to feel runs strong & how when she left you, she destroyed you. The pain is unbearably felt in this piece.
Cold floor, bare room
Life is shredded, torn apart
Eyes full of tears, pictures to burn
Broken promises, shattered heart
~ this is my favorite stanza
But all in all I loved it all :)
A very fantastic, wonderful job I loved it though it was sad
A 5/5 from me :)