by TJ Arizona Eagle Oct 18, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Lost in a world of sightless eyes, |
by BlueJay
Wow, great piece. Emotional and so well written. The word choice is terrific and the images are stunning as usual from you. |
The words create quite a few powerful images flashing through the reader's mind that can definitely touch them in unexplainable ways. Very well-written. |
by retha
Touch then softer than a breath sway upon the melody of this moment as if in death. |
by nouriguess
That was so dark, sad and emotional. The ending spoke out to me. Perfect write. |
Amazing! |