Comments : Words Will Turn To Pain

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    My head tells me to forget,

    Although my heart points straight to you.

    -This is my favorite part :)

    I love love this poem. How much you love him shows through, wanting to make it right, but knowing whatever happens he will always have your heart.
    This flowed perfectly & was flawless.

    Amazing Job<3
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Good Enough

    I would make this into a whole poem instead of breaking it up line for line. this is a really good poem. i love the imagery. i read it over and over to feel what you were feeling. keep up the good work 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    This was a stunning poem I really liked it

    "To be honest, I'm not happy.

    Its been A while since I told the truth.

    My head tells me to forget,

    Although my heart points straight to you. "

    ^ so powerful

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Amreen

    "To be honest, I'm not happy.

    Its been A while since I told the truth.

    My head tells me to forget,

    Although my heart points straight to you. "

    ^ my favorite part of the poem...
    I could relate a lot to the poem and overall 5/5