Her GoodBye

by XblackrainbowsX   Oct 19, 2011


Her tears are red.
she wishes she was dead.
she sits alone in the dark.
with the music loud.
so she wont hear anything.
she doesnt wanna deal with anyone.
shes beenn in pain for so long.
but was happy for a while.
shes soon to go back to pain.
while she watches him walk away.
shes dying from all the pain.
so she walks to the lake to solve her pain.
she takes off her shoes.
takes out her phone.
takes out a letter for the one she loves.
saying
"Shes sorry for everything. and the best thing is for to leave. she cant take anymore pain. so this is goodbye."
she takes slow steps into the water.
leaving everything behind.
as she walks deeper she cries.
she doesnt turn back she cant.
she keeps going.
shes gone.
GoodBye.

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  • 7 years ago

    by Milo

    Suicide by love, is a dark and deeply constructed idea. Emotions associated with the thought of the ultimate self destruction are all over this poem, even if they are disguised and subtle. But subtle pain, the kind of pain no one else sees, is the real thing. And that's what I want, real emotions. You have taken me to a deep place with this poem. Thank you. And you've been gone awhile from this site, hopefully you'll come back someday.