Woah... this is intense. I finished reading it and was like wow... This is harsh but very well written. It's like it came easy to you but I could feel a sadness and sense of pain in it at the same time.. The way you worded and wrote this was incredible. You have an amazing mind. Fantastic write!

Danika.

OHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
MYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFF
GOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

YAKZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ

ill mimc u and write in caps:

OH MY GOSH U ARE SUCH A GODDESS WHEN IT COMES TO POETRY TO FREE VERSE ESP....OH DEAR WHAT THE HELL

find warmth within my breast.

^
YOU TALKED BOUT YOUR BREAST, IS MY OBSESSION CONTAGIOUSSS??

:OOOOOOOO

the last two lines made it alllll

bravooo urrrrr
omgggg

As I read this it seemed kinda sad (and relatable) but then I read the last lines and wanted to stand up and cheer!!!
Well done!!!!

As I read this it seemed kinda sad (and relatable) but then I read the last lines and wanted to stand up and cheer!!!
Well done!!!!