Comments : Wings of Feather

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    I liked the soft touch this poem had, a feel of gentleness. Awesome flow and you carried it through out the poem

    I only have one question and please forgive me if I'm wrong but shouldn't this line
    "wings of feather"
    read better if it was....
    wings of a feather/ or wings of feathers?