This is the best poem I have ever read, it had so much emotion, such amazing imagery, I am sorry you had to go through this, keep writing.

Awesome write. I have a really hard time reading LONG stuff, but this was great and held my attention all the way thru. Loved the twist at the end. :) Alot of different emotions are packed inside this piece. Take care ~Lostlove1

WOOOOW. and NICE ENDING!!!

Tehe i loved the ending made me laugh the start was sad the middle was really good

This is well written, before reading, i doubted i was going to finish it coz its long but when i started to read it, i knew y it had to be wrong..you combine your skill of storytelling with writing poetry and put them into one. It started out very sad, but i loved the ending, how the girl gets her revenge. Brilliant, can make a great movie.

Loved it!!