Comments : You & I

  • 13 years ago

    by Georgia

    I really like this. Beautiful poem :) 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Your poem was good up the last line.
    It just doesn't blend well with the rest of it. :/

  • 13 years ago

    by yogi73

    Ouch! I get your point! well done