I really like this poem, it has alot of emotion in it and alot of people can relate to the story within it. well done 5/5

Very good poem. Beautiful Disaster is right, I'm sure a lot of people can relate to it. I'd really like to see you try your hand at a free verse poem. You're very good at expressing your emotions but I feel trying to rhyme your words limits you. Keep writing hun. -Nik

I've tried free verse lol I don't like it as much as rhyming...idk why tho, just is weird to write that way I guess