Luvly.... Simply luv poems n dis ones so much full of innocence.. Keep it up dost...:) (in hindi dost meanz fren..:)

Luvly.... Simply luv poems n dis ones so much full of innocence.. Keep it up dost...:) (in hindi dost meanz fren..:)

This poem is so simple and so nice flowing for reader. understanding simple and powerful full of emotions. very admiring. and attractive. words use is good...

but I think that
I might be falling for you.

this is what i was waiting and hoping to write in this poem and the last few lines are very good. give the final and special touch to all words. great work. another nice piece Guys!!

Falling for him?
Falling for here?

Whatever..
I just think I'm falling for this :)

Great collab both of you.

In real life, you can make it together :P lol, I think.

I love it and i agree with 3aboudie lol, oh lalala.. love from behind my back! :P

i love this so much, intertwined thoughts and feelings.

good luck! good poem! good everything :P

When somebody say's sorry you MUST know that he don't deserve forgiveness unless he walks away looking back starring at birds looking down at the ground for a reason to break the ALL the NOTHINGS and reasonless reasons he stepped inside the hidden door :D lol whatver is the answer good job guyz :) LIKE

Wow I love this! I must say you both are amazing at collaborating poems - you should continue! It was very cohesive, and I honestly who wrote who, which really shows how hard you worked on it.... I loved the title, it caught my eye, and I must say I loved the beginning, it really engaged me and made me want to read more... I loved the story of this poem... Amazing! Great job to both of you <333

Been a long time since i've seen a title match a poem so well. Well done with the use of the mental condition schizophrenia to portray love