Very trippy words you've penned here! I really enjoy your style!

Sometimes your poems are over my head :-) but eventually see what you mean. Yes I'm blond and have those moments of HUH?
I really enjoy your work, I love your style and your mind.

Connie

A very chilling poem my friend. I love the diction and how you used it to express yourself. Very well done. Glad to see you writing again. -Nik

Admittedly i had to look up a few words lol. but once i did this made a lot more sense. well enjoyed and it is sad how various religions seem to take the humanity from us, or perhaps we are all too brain dead and do so willingly?

one long legacy left unchanged by time and tradition.... creating our own doom.

I Really Enjoy Your Word Choice!
And I Enjoy Your Style!
You Have Great Talent!
5/5
:)

I have to admit that your choice of words made this poem even more interesting than it already is for its message. I do have to admit that I had to look up one word or another, but it was definately worth it. I really enjoyed reading this poem and I know I'll end up reading it another time.

What I like about your poetry and this poem inpeticular is that you try to to break away from the norm. You can tell you really try to put your own stamp on poetry and it really pays off

5/5

I understand what your points are, especially the cyanide stanza. Very intriging indeed.

Very interesting write with words that really
got me looking into a dictionary! All in all a very deep and provoking write..excellent!

It's indeed very interesting.
But I really have one comment that might help you.

Fancy words can be annoying, sometimes.
Maybe if you include some of them, for the reader not to stumble upon 5 of them in one line :p

lol, sorry, but it's just my thought.

Other than that, I really like the atmosphere you have created. So imaginative, fanciful and oh... what is it?
Flamboyant ;)

My gosh this piece is stunning. I agree with all that has been said, although I disagree with the above about "Fancy words can be annoying, sometimes.
Maybe if you include some of them, for the reader not to stumble upon 5 of them in one line :p" because I think the use of vocabulary can make or break a piece. To me this piece would not be the same had you used more ordinary words. Anyway I think this piece is definatley worthy of 5/5 and that you have penned a marvelous piece.

This amazing.... you write so deep and thoughtful.... I love it....:)

Love the darkness here 5\5