by Something Diabolical Oct 19, 2011
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Deep underground bodies rise from their graves |
by Ben Pickard
Great rhythm and rhyme here. An excellent topic too. The title really drew me in. Well done. |
by Reaper
I love zombies! and this poem described them well very amazing! :)))) 5/5 |
Wow i love this :) |
Amazing :) I loved it,,it was greatly written and wow it was so fantastic and great a really terrific job I loved it :) 5/5 |
Most ppl have problems with the rhyme theme in poems. You have conquered that to perfection. It's never forced but flows nicely. You have talent my friend, keep writing each poem will be better than the last. The only suggestion I have is add some emotional value instead of just being descriptive. Awesome bro :-) |