Deadly Love

by MyaEve   Oct 20, 2011


I looked out my window,
what do I see?
A perfect little world,
that has mimicked me.
With empty souls,
crying in pain.
and rejected girls,
walking in the rain.

For I loved once,
with a pure heart.
Until his death,
slowly tore me apart.
A shot to the head,
brought me to say goodbye.
His head full of deathly thoughts,
which brought
tears
to
my
eyes.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Nice and sad lines!Well written poem...
    I liked it!

    Steven

  • 13 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Thanks, Tony(:
    I really appreciate it.

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This was a really... Powerful piece. .. I liked the way it ended as well the format was wickid 5/5

    Tony x