by sHaTtErEdMiStAkE Oct 20, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
It's Been 6 Years, |
by Lady Nik
I can relate to this a lot. Reminds me of a lot of my older stuff when I first started writing and all I could think about was pain and suffering. My on suggestion to you is to not put every word in CAPS. I think using CAPS for every word can be distracting and can take away from your poems. Anyways good job dear. Very emotional piece. Keep writing. -Nik |