Aw poor friend I hope you don't feel this way and I'm very sorry if you do and wish many smiles upon that frowning face :/
Fantastic poem I loved it :) 5/5

I felt myself becoming more, and more claustrophobic as the poem went on. A very affective write. Strong emotions, vivid images. 5/5

mandy :)

Wow. This is most definatly unique. The emotion is dead on well written, because the reader can feel how you say you feel. Yes, it is vivid, though I do not think vivid is a strong enough word to describe it. the style and flow are interesting and help give this poem some of its terrific tone. Overall, excellent job.

"By a sweet sorceress who still stalks my soul"

I really like this end for it leaves the reader with a question mark..no answers just a question, a wovdering thought...very well done!

^^ I agree withMeena Krish, the ending is lovely:)
Well written a 5/5 from me:)

The write was electric, charged with emotions . Every word pulled the reader in. Showing us a taste of what lies beneath the written word.

This poem is the poem of the week. i like it. its an amazing poem that i read in this week. full of emotions. and so easy to understand. the flow is awesome. you are a great writer..

I really liked this poem!

It was well written and I feel that a lot of people including myself will connect with the poem as well as the poet.

What I got from reading this poem was how heartbreaking losing love can be. How our pastlovers can make us feel numb and cold as well as trapped in an emotion of hell.

They aren't with you anymore but somehow still control you. They've taken away your existence and reason for being.

A deep emotional poem

Loved it

Liz

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I really like this one x

Beautiful...excellent

Magnificent

Thank You for your kind words on my poem:) I will be posting more work up.