Intruder (Haiku)

Beautiful Haiku. I love reading haiku's about the moon, the stranger in the sky. Much enjoyed :)

I am starting to really appreciate Haiku poems and how so much can be expressed with so little words.

This was a well written haiku. I got scared reading the poem at the thought of an intruder, made me want to close my curtains if I had any lol

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This a good poem. It was descriptive for a short piece and I loved your use of words. You really know how to put a poem together well.

5/5

I think I've said this a million times but one more wont hurt. Haiku's are hard to do, in order to make them come to life the wording has to be just right. You penned this with a talented pen..Excellent

Myryn.
Haikus are one of my favorite forms.

And I like how you described the moon.. as an obnoxious person who wants to creep through your solitude.

Amazing.