Wow this great :)
i love the flow and wording, it makes it very powerful and emotional. Great job ! 5/5 :)

All that I can say about this overall is that it is awesome. If i were to get technical, I would have to say the flow is amazing, the word choice is simple yet nice, the length feels perfect, and the emotions seem spot on. Also I would have to say the voice and tone you have put into it are terrific. This piece was penned very well and I must say it is almost perfection. 5/5