A little girls dream

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Oct 20, 2011


Unicorn's graciously run
Across a field of wild dandelions
As rainbows fill the light blue sky
With sweet candy floss clouds

Chocolate Milk Rivers flow
Through the valley of lollipops
Walking over the cola cube floor
She reaches the candy corn bridge

Finally reaching her castle
Made only of the most delicious cakes
She sits on her throne tasting
The honey glistened walls

Her eyes open wide
Smile as big as the morning sun
She can't wait to close her eyes again
Back to the happiness of her
Dream land.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    You have captured the happiness and imagination of a little girl's dream flawlessly! fantastic! the imagery is amazing, as always.

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Lioness

    What a lovely poem! I could really invision this place in my head. (I don't know if it's because it may be close to that time of the month for me) but I started craving candy as I was reading it

    As rainbows fill the light blue sky
    With sweet candy floss clouds

    Candy floss clouds - I LOVE THIS - I can imagine floating on these clouds and eating them at the same time lol

    I still dream of places like this

    Nicely done

    x

  • 13 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    You are amazing. It seems all the poems tonight are magical and full of wonder. I really enjoyed this very much Tony

    Connie

  • 13 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Love this<3

    You can see everything in your head as if you're dreaming this yourself. Candy & sweet delights :)
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You penned magic, a little girls vivid and wishful dream. I enjoyed the wording and the images. A great flow and a wonderful poem that makes one feel good. Excellent

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