Comments : LifeTime :s:

  • 13 years ago

    by Georgia

    Very good poem. I like the flow and I also like the wording 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by 1DollA

    Thank you! (:

  • 13 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    Great story very creative. I like how the tone changed midway.

  • 13 years ago

    by Jeremy S Farley

    Great story very creative. I like how the tone changed midway.